"Teardrop Lullaby" - New poem! Comments would be loved!

I just set up a new poem I wrote last night; "Teardrop Lullaby", I'd love it if you could comment and/or rate it! I'd be sure to return the favour!

Done :)

awesome stuff you have up
will be nice if you returned the favour.

Thanks! I just went through your poems and I'd def. have to say likewise. i really enjoyed your work!