Poem Bloopers

I was wondering if you guys ever make bloopers while writing a poem?

Cause.. sometimes im writing, and I get tired cause I cant get write down what I want to the way I want it, then I start to write down stupid things cause im bored hahaha.

I always delete it or throw it on a trash pile hah. But it might be quite funny to put some bloopers in here, if you guys have some offcourse. Hope I'm not the only one.. Well I kept my blooper of today :P Here it is

In my hands I’m holding a fragile dream,
I hold it tight for I’m going downstream.
In my chest I’m holding a bleeding heart,
I use the bathroom when you have to fart.

Erm.. the last phrase ruins it doesnt it? hehe Oh well Ill change it :P and make something of it tomorrow haha

My sister read one of my poems called Falling and remarked that although it started off poetic and elegant, it kind of became harsh at the end, almost slang.
I guess I was having a bad day..:-)

Good Writing!
beth

Lol ye I sometimes do that too, writin the same words over again hehehee, But ye.. when I get pissed or have a bad day, it sometimes just won't come out the way I want it to hehe.

Or very harsh, killing someone and bathing in his blood and rip his heart from his chest :S (thats the poem I wrote yesterday, it was .. very scary hahaha)

I do that all the time I'll be writing but I forget to go back and look at my poems to make sure I didn't make any mistakes...so yeah...I do it alot...

I do that 99% of the time.