GREAT deal!!

for ever ONE poem of mine that you comment on, I will do the same for 5 of yours. I will do honest comments too.

ok, make sure to check out my new one

I just read "The Funeral" my sgueestions were stated in there.

Please read:

"Prince of Heartaches"

"Red Envelopes"

"For Love or Money"

"Universal Spell"

"Heaven's Gate" (an older poem)

Thanks ahead of time M'Dear. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

any 5 poems of mine... off to do urs..