need a little help!

I've been writing poems for a while now, but i just don't know how or where i'm going with this. No-one really knows me on this site...so if you could please take a little time out to read my poems and comment or suggest something individually on them, that would be appreciated. thanks for reading :)

I suggest you edit this post before Bob or any other Elf sees it...
LEARN TO READ THE RULES!