I jsut want you to coment on this poem please

To my gurl friend...here

It starts with you, here it is

--Your...
----Your....
------Your...
Your somthing incredible
Your somthing great
Your a reason to belive love isn't fake

You give me a feeling
You give me a kiss
But you kno somthing else, you granted my wish

You really do love me
You really do care
You just dont how i feel when you are there

You make me stare
You make me smile
You make me belive this is going to last awhile

Im gald your by my side
Im glad your 15
Im glad when im talking your acually listening

Im loveing everythign about you
Im loveing that you care
But Im also loveing the way you do your hair

Im hear with you
Im hear to stay
Im also here to watch you play

I love your smile
i love you jokes
I love going to the pantry and buyin you cokes

I love you for ever
I love you as you are
I love the fact that next year your getting a car(lol)

I love to make you smile
I love to make you laugh
I even love the fact your smarter than me at math(lol)

I love you boo, i really do

love your man,
josh hayden

ps:boo i love you no doubt about it

Ok this is really a fabulous poem and very emotional your girl is lucky, For sure A couple of things 2nd stanza you spelled know (kno)
6th stanza first line misspelled everything(everythign)
7th stanza I think you meant here not hear in
I'm here with you
I'm here to stay
Also try capitalizing when using I you missed it a couple of times. otherwise absolutely romantic keep up the good work.
Cathy

I GIVE THIS A 5 YOU`R GIRL IS VERY LUCKY TO HAVE YOU