New Poems, Need Feedback

well I added prolly every single poem from my collection that I wrote (cuz I joined this site only yesterday and been writing for 2-3 months)

so I need some feedback and would really appreciate it, especially please read 'Story Part 1' and 'Story Part 2', thx if you spend your time reading any of my stuff

lol, can someone help me come up with titles for my poems, I would greatly appreciate it

if ya got a suggestion please email me at nickvlasov@hotmail.com

cuz I cant come up with titles, its pwetty hard