Please Please Please

Hey everyone could you check out my latest poem or any of my other ones. I would really appreciate any comments on how I can improve my writing. Thanks a bunch. O heres the newest poem.

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=546991

Lots of love.. ***Ashley***

Will Do :)

If you could VOTE on my poem "Do you or Don't You" that would be great Hehe, Thanks

Not a problem I voted and I left a comment. Great poem by the way I loved it. And your a great writer. :)