New poem please tell me what you think

I havent written anything in a good while. And all of a sudden this one hit me. Its probably not the best in the world but I wrote it as it came to me, took me bout 10 min. Just wondering what ya'll think bout it. This one means a lot to me. It's called A Gift Thanks bunches

Ok i know it doesnt flow well and rhyme well, but i wrote it as it came out, i like poems that you dont spend an hour or so on trying to perfect it. This is mine, it came from me. Took me no time to just write it down and thats good to me. To write what you can on a whim, to me it means more. course thats just me, what do i know.