could u?

can you people please check out my latest poem. its pretty deep and id like ppl other then my friends to tell me how it is. since friends tell u things are great just to make u happy. and all.. it would help me a lot. thanks in advance

This should probably go in the requesting comments forum...I'm just saying...

And of course, I'll check it out, just write in the other forum next time.

-beth

Ok i will.

yeah i know, my computer wouldnt let me post it in there. it only lets me do certain things.. its so screwed up. and i changed the spelling, it was fine when i posted it, the site changed it around because it noticed the wrong mark between each n the t in "couldnt" and "dont"

and thanks