"questions and answers" and "I need you here"

please comment on my 2 new poems. I will return the favour, honest comments please. Im not bothered if you say there rubbish, it helps me understand my poems more.
Cheers
xxx
Tara

cool stuff.
return the favour..?

I'll read them now.
Could you do....Scarred Out Of Blood and New Day, Continous Nightmare.

Thanks, i really appreciate it.
xxx cici xxx