*New Poem* - "My Own Downfall"

  • Darien
    20 years ago

    I wrote a new poem dedicated to my ex. She deserves so much better. I wish her eternal happiness from the bottomof my heart.

    The poem is called "My Own Downfall"
    I will return the favour.
    I always do ;)

  • cowgurlsweetie
    20 years ago

    I will, but I have no poems in yet, but I'll do it anyways, bye! *waves hand*

    cowgurlsweetie

  • cowgurlsweetie
    20 years ago

    Nvm, I liked the poem I mean, but I've just entered in a poem, hope you like it! bye!

  • cowgirlstar26
    20 years ago

    loved it! thx for r/c on mine

  • Darien
    20 years ago

    Thanks and No probs.

    haha cowgirls .. haha ..

  • Richard
    20 years ago

    ok i just have to say i am so like i dont even know
    what u just said about ur ex something in that like regret but even after a relationship u can still see that people have goodness inside them

  • Richard
    20 years ago

    and do mine called Machine Malfunction

  • Darien
    20 years ago

    Thanks Richard.
    Very nice poem.

    check out my comment