woah, hey now

so i havent written a poem in forever and a half, and i finally did, and I got a 1 on it. i mean come on if you're willing to give less than a 3 you shold give some critisicm, and I know hte poems not so great so helpful comments would be greatly appreciated.

oh yeah my poem is called "Must be the rain"

i read it and i thought it was worht much better then a 1. i commented and voted

Ruby