New Peom, please r/r/c

my new poem "I Steadily Fall..." i would love it if you coudl all please r/r/c it please i would really appreciate i will make sure to r/r/c one or more of your poems as well adn if there are any specifics you would like me to do just leave them here thanks and your welcome

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

you know whats really funny.. i commented and voted on yours.. and when i got back to my poems.. you commented and voted... weird huh??

~David

lol that is actualyl kinda funny, i love to comment and vote especially if i like the poem and im usualyl quick about it lol, and thank you for the comments and such

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*