depressing poems

so i guess not everything is always that happy, i love writing love poems, but i guess its something for a change, i'm falling into depression again...

please rate/comment my first depressing poem?
it's called "falling"
i'll return favour as fast as i can for comments :)

i'll probably have more sad poems and love poems coming, but all will have depressing endings since the only thing that was ever able to end my depression is gone now...

thanks
alwaysremeniceus

ill check it out. you can check out mine... 7 of my 8 are sad... so your welcome to check them out.

~David

Done.
Basically all of my poems are sad.
But the ones under the sadness & depression section are obviously "sadder".. Check em out!
And comment and rate please! :)

gr8 poem.....keep up the gr8 work!

~*Who Cares?*~

sure, i'll check it out. most of my poems are depressing. could you please read broken and tell me what you think? thanks in advance!

I checked out very good poem....Most of mine are sad so feel free to look

mm.. thanks :)

i have a new one that i like a lot too...
its called "When i close my eyes"
and yea, i read some of your poems too, think i commented on most that i read :)

-kelsie

either of my two newest, thanks

another one... "Insomnia"
dedicated to all the tears i've cried, tears that he cried, the pain we're going through.. which.. is actually kind of pointless... but emotions are emotions, theres no reason for them~
and finished another one just now called "thoughts"... they're driving me crazy!!

Travis: ok, vote and commented.. :) loved the poems~
-kelsie