last nite's mixed emotions...

i wrote a poem last nite after my band concert...
i guess its kind of really sad... but i want to send it to my boyfriend later since he's getting his report back this afternoon...

he's been pushing me away after he found out he may have brain cancer or a tumor... and hes not even 18 yet... we're really scared but i hope he's ok cause hes got such a long and good life ahead of him... i guess i just want him to know that i really love him with all my heart...
but i appreciate if you would comment on my new poem "Winter Concert", suggestions or anything, so hopefully i can improve on it a bit before i send it to him?

thanks
alwaysremeniceus