continuing depression, r/r/c please?

  • alwaysremeniceus
    20 years ago

    i'm kind of depressed and if everything isn't too bad i want to send my boyfriend some poems tonight, i hope someone can do me a huge favour to read and commen on how i can improve before i send to him??

    the poems are
    "What she wants"
    "Falling"
    "Questions"
    "Winter Concert"
    "Clouds"

    thanks lots in advance :)