new to site-Interested in your opinion

I have been writing since I was about 9 years old. I am now 29. I have been told by friends to submit some of my writings. This is the first time I have ever done so. I have submitted only 2 poems for now. The poem entitled "no more" I wrote when I was 13. It was originally entitled "Suicide." I am interested to how others read what I wrote without knowing me or my past. Please be open and honest. I appreciate you taking the time to read.

sure i read them your really good better now i bet