my latest.. and its INSPIRATIONAL.. wow

yeah so please check out
"Death's Kiss"
post on here after you comment and vote
ill be happy to return the favor on any poem you like.

~David

Great poem David.

Please rcv on my latest, the abyss

okay.. i added the finishing touch to it because it didnt seem to end. so now its complete.. please, feel free to check it out. and remember.

if there is a poem that you want to to vote and comment on for you aswell feel free to name it.. name a couple if you like.. just tell me then after you vote and comment on mine.
thanks,

~David

is there anyone else?

I enjoyed it very much.

I LOVE THE CHANGE. It adds more and completes the poem. Awesome job!

--Sher

Please read either Life Sentence or Teary Eyes thanks babe

i wish i read your poem a week ago! maybe things would be bit better if i did x.x.. but i won't let things get much worst... (There pretty much isns't many things other than death that are worst now)

but i do feel a little better... :)
if you could read "This Merry Christmas", "Unforgivable Mistake", or any of the more recent poems that would be great :)

thanks
-kelsie

I read it... If you could please r/r/c my inspirational poem called "A Letter From Your Soul" it would be greatly appreciated! Thanksya muches in advance!

~BJ~

okay im all done commenting . and i loved them all... whos next?

will anyone else check out my poem?

i'll go have a look now