Read each others best work !

  • chavii
    20 years ago

    There are really many good poets on this site whose work goes unnoticed , most of us just doesn know each other, so this idea came to .......

    Each of us post our "one" fav poem or just mention name , or give link (ur choice).
    the next person reads it n gives his\her n chain goes so most have chance to read best work n know each other better.

    well since the topic starts from me , im posting one of my fav poem......

    Unspoken Words

    When my heart needed an interpreter,
    i gave 'words' the job
    but to whom shall they interpret now,
    He is long ago gone.
    Like a fallen knight who lost his valour,
    the words lies in my heart unheard and unspoken.

    --chavii--

  • Puerto_Rican_Chick
    20 years ago

    wow... deep lines, hun. im'ma put you on my favorite list, btw. this is my poem...

    .:*Thoughts Of A Girl With A Dieing Heart*:.

    What has brought this pain upon me?
    because the cause i cannot see.
    im so broke down in many pieces,
    when will the end to this pain finally meet?

    i would do anything to leave this world,
    and drift off into mine,
    but what is imaginary cant be real.
    what way out can i find?

    my hopes and dreams came crashing
    down many years ago.
    im scared, beat up... in black and blues
    cause of the many times i've been thrown.

    what if i just left this world
    in a bloody suicide?
    would it make the weight of a ton go off?
    between the depression and glee was i able to decide?

    in every aspect of my life i hurt...
    and i have yet to find anything to ease my pain.
    how much more strength to go on do i have?
    do i have the strength to go another day?

    i know with the days that are passing
    my heart rate is slowing down.
    no one can help me at this point
    cause by tomorrow my body is going to be buried 6ft. underground.

    .:*La Boricua*:.

  • chavii
    20 years ago

    Those are very heartfelt lines , reflects your inner pain very well ..............
    hold on to your hats things will be better ,remember the light is always chasing away the darkness.......

    Thanks for reading my poem really appreaciate it.
    Hope to hear more from u :-)

    Best
    chavii.

  • Sherry Lynn
    20 years ago

    Any written by Bob Shank

    --Sher

  • chavii
    20 years ago

    Yes sher every poem written by Bob is just amazing. You can feel the wisdom and experience woven beautifully in each poem .He remains my favorite .

  • chavii
    20 years ago

    Wish you all a very Merry X-mas n Best wishes with lots of good luck for coming year :-)

    Best Wishes,
    chavii