dont forget about us !

ok well i have i think 11 votes and a 3.8 could you all let me know what i did wrong on this poem ??? by R/R/C and leave some here or on your comment and i'll do the same for you

no you dont, you have a 4.7.

no you dont, you have a 4.7.

You wrote a less than excellent poem.

You sugest to check the grammar, and also don't mention "baby" in the middle of a line, there was a time when the word kind of cut in.

That's what I think made the poem less than a 5. or so.