New poem "That Girl"please comment

it would mean alot to me if you commented. Imreally like this poem and will comment two fo yours in return . You may post the poems you wish me to comment and if you have no particualr preference then tell me and i will just pick some. Thank you so much.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Haha, Becky, I didn't even read this and yet I commented out of the kindness of my heart...

Smile.

lol aww thanxe matt your so sweet, thanks

and to everyoen else please pelase comment and leave your poems here pelase it would mean alot to me.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

I read both oyur poems and they were amazing, they really and truly were. I was touched by both of them.

IF anyone else could please read and comment "That Girl" i would greatly appreciate it. thanxe a bunch

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Aww hun!!! You did a wonderful job!!! I liked it alot!! Could you please go check out
The abusive love of a father
Is love forever

Thanks hun!!!

thank you to everyone and your welcome. as of right now i have commented atleast two of everyones poems that have commented mine, even if they didnt post on here. Thank you and your welcome.

More people still would be great though. I am actually rather proud of this poem(which is rare for me) so i would love as many comments as i can get.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*