my looong poem!

i've just written quite along poem coz i'm feeling a bit shit at the moment and i'd really like to know what people think of it so if you have time could you just take a look and tell me what you think, good or bad i don't mind and i will always take a look at your poems! take care xxxx

heh will take a look at it now :) try look at my latest one too if possible :)

hey nick pome hun... you can look at any of mine you like.... thanks