some of my poems with less comments

  • Tara Kay
    20 years ago

    it would be a massive help to me if you could comment on some of the poems that have not many comments. I understand these poems are not the best ones but all honest comments are helpful, even if you think the poem is totally rubbish.
    -my friend and her boyfriend
    -I still see you when my eyes are closed
    -Water
    -My friend (sarah)
    -Opposites
    -ten reasons why i love you
    -look to the future
    -Always there
    -Friends.

    I do not expect you to comment on them all, maybe 2 or 3 would be fine.
    thanks in advance.
    i hope i will be able to return the favour asap.
    love tara-kay