New and learning

Hey everyone , i am new of writing poems , i know my writing skill is not good but i hope to get better and i want to know what people think of my poems so i can get better , can anyone help me plz ?

i have commented on your poems and i hope they help. I love your style and you may only be starting out but you are already very good.
keep it up.
please could you return the favour and comment on mine
love Tara-Kay