Yay New Poem. Take A Look Inside.

Okay, I have a new poem and would love some feedback on it. It's called. Story of a Girl. I'll comment on five of your poems if you just comment this one. Leave the names of the poems here and I'll get started right away. Thankies muchly.

can u pls do
murder or suicide
love is where you are
each night
my only wish

im off to do urs right now

Any of mine would be good.
I would love to read yours.
I'll do it now. xD