"Musings Of You"

I have just posted a poem which I plan on giving to my Fiance when we celebrate two years of being together later on this month.

The poem is called "Musings Of You."

I am requesting comments because I need to make sure it is of the greatest quality as I can possible make it. So please leave constructive criticism. If it needs improving please state where and how. If you think it is fine as it is, please say so.

More information about the poem is presented below the poem, in the poem text area, if you would like to know more.

All comments will be returned. Thanks.

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Hey hun I just read it and I really don't think you need to change anything about it. You did a great job.