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ok I really want some comments. But teh deal only works if they're good comments.

example
(bad): Good job, lots of emotion.

example
(good):I think this-------------------because-------------------you did this well--------------------------you could improve by-----------------------than any other thoughts---------------

I dunno, I dont really care, I just want some good honest feedback, you will get it in return

Love,
Melanie