seeking feedback on new material

history - short (4 lines only), but i tried to inject as much meaning as i could. requires a pretty deep look to get all of it... but the surface is pretty too. rhyming, oddly enough. different, but in a good or bad way?

butterflies are free AND except you... - same type of style for both. neither are really my best work, but i'm stuck on how to improve on them. i thought i was in a bit of a rut until i wrote...

scrape - i'm rather partial to this one, but the feeling could change, i really just finished it. not as long as the above two, but with a similar style. kind of added a bit of a twist though.

check out as many as you feel like. i'm aiming to improve here and honest honest honest criticism is always always always appreciated. which should be obvious seeing as i'm basically here begging for it. I WILL RETURN ANY COMMENTS. just so you know. much love.