My only poem, "mommy, daddy's coming!"

  • Serenity
    20 years ago

    Hello everyone! I was wondering if you all could do me a favour and R/R/C my only poem entitled "Mommy, Daddy's coming!"

    I promise I will return the favour. I just really need feedback.

    Thanks in advance

    X0x0x0xX Serenity

  • Unforgiven Retniap doolb
    20 years ago

    I will

  • Serenity
    20 years ago

    will do.

    thanks all!

  • amber
    20 years ago

    i will