can i have some comments plz..ill comment on yours too

hey just want sum comments ona few of my poems if any of u wondeful ppl have the chance to...i especiall wanna no wat uthink of broken beauty part 1 and 2 and a couple of the others..thanx everyone
xxxHugglesxxxStace

count me in!!!

I'll help you out. Have a look at mine if you want.