comment for a comment!

hey...i just wrote a new poem called The tear stained notebook ....its a sequal to my poem The tear-stained paper....um its not that good but i would like some advice on it so if you read and comment on it then i will read and comment one of your poems.....just tell me which one to read and comment and i will do it as soon as i can
thanks!
.:amanda:.

p.s. if you read/comment more than one of my poems then i will do the same amount for you