Some of my poems. Need Feedback, and comments =)

  • James Nguyen
    19 years ago

    -You're my everything
    -You're my love
    -How can it ever be enough?
    -Please.. I love you
    -I dont get it
    -Only you...

    Look me up ^_^ and rate please =)... I would love feedback.. If you rate 3 or lower I would like to know some ways I can improve it. Thank you. For those who think my poems are good, I thank you greatfully.

  • Riffy
    19 years ago

    Hey! I've just read one of your poems, and it was great =0)
    Keep it up!

  • James Nguyen
    19 years ago

    Thank so much ^_^.. Haha, you're not so bad yourself, love your poems =)

  • James Nguyen
    19 years ago

    Wow, thank you very much. =)