4 new poems, can anyone give me some feedback?

  • LostHopesCrimsonTears
    19 years ago

    i have been in a long almost 9 month block of just about nothing for writing, and i just spat out 4 new poem/lyrics....

    so any ratings/comments would be greatly appreciated

    the 4 new ones to read are:

    set you free
    time to go
    my final day
    just like me

    thnx bunches, and also, i will do my best to return a r/c to any who comment on mine :)