Would like a little more input

  • Patrick
    19 years ago

    I have 3 poems that I started with on this site and I would love to hear a bit more about what people think of them. So that I might be able to improve my writing skills for future writing,

    Thank you, West

  • Lost Soul 691
    19 years ago

    I'll take a look and let you know ... for what my two cents might be worth. I did already comment, but it was strictly regarding the emotions emitted, rather than the writing skills.

    I'll get back to you.
    :)

  • Patrick
    19 years ago

    Thank you, its greatly appreciated

    West

  • Lost Soul 691
    19 years ago

    I've just sent you an email with my comments on Darkness Has Become Me.

    Cheers

  • Patrick
    19 years ago

    Thanks a mill,

    You gave me some great input and its a real help. If you ever need the favor returned feel free to ask.

    Thanks, West

  • Lost Soul 691
    19 years ago

    Just sent an email regarding The Nature of Sad Love. I absolutely adored this one, and have read it several times this afternoon. :)