my new poem "Friendship Is Forever"

  • Patrick
    19 years ago

    I want to improve my writing skills so all imput is welcome as long as its constructive critisicum. This poem is very dear to me, it may not be perfect but I wrote it for me and my friends when we all moved off into our seprate lives.

    Thank you very much,

    West

  • NannO
    19 years ago

    hey.. i read ur poem.. its reli nice
    keep it up
    take care
    Nouna