"Orange Peel"

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    That's the title of my poem that I'm requesting feedback on.
    I think it's different and I personally feel it's one of my best writes. Therefore, I am looking for feedback on it, be as critical as you like; there is always room for improvement.

    It's quite metaphorical and despite what the title suggests it isn't completely about an orange.

    Feel free to let me know what my poem means to you, as I have tried to leave the meaning open for interpretation by the reader.

    Thanks,
    I will of course return the favour as soon as I recieve your comment.

    Silver

  • Sondos
    19 years ago

    Its really brilliant
    A masterpiece even

    Well Done
    All the Best
    Sondos

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Thanks Sondos...

    Your interpretation was interesting. As I said at the bottom of the poem every interpretation is correct, even if it is not necessarily the same as what my interpretation is.
    Thank you for really reading the poem and thinking about the meaning, by what you said in your comment I can see you saw deeper than just the words.

    Thanks again.

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Please everyone feel free to comment.

    I will return the favour... even on a particular poem if you specify the title.

    P.S. AFTER you have read my poem and decided what it means (please no cheating) I have left a comment on my own work (I know it sounds sad) of how I (as the writer) interpret the poem. I hope that helps anyone who is having trouble understanding the poem.

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • Sondos
    19 years ago

    The comment you left describing what you meant in the poem certainly makes sense. I think its such a brilliant write. You are such an inspiration to me.
    Please, if you have time comment on my poem 'Fight of the Colours'. Thanks so much

    All the Best
    Sondos