comment please?

hey you guys i was just wondering if you could comment ANY of my poems. good or bad. i want to know what i need to fix, or what you guys like.
i'll always comment back.
thanx XD
-lauren

thanks and yeah i'll do yours too

Just commented on a couple of your poems... good work. Just offering my 2 cents... Overall, I do like your work, keeping writing and emphasis more on the flow. Hope that helps. :o)

thanks for you comments...
and i took your advice.
you have some pretty good poems yourself...