if you would

I would appriciate it greatly if yall would read some/all of my poems and let me know where my weak spots are. i'll return the favor with votes and comments. thanks. -*Leah*-

i'm not asking for anyone to rate or comment on my poems. i'm wanting someone to read them so they can tell me how to improve my writing ways. sorry for the confusion.

Left comments on the following:

"Gone"
"She"
"Your words"

Great writes... Keep up the great work!