New At This Writing Style

Hey, i have been writing in a new style (Acrostic) and i just wanted a few comments to see how you guys like it and if im doing ok!

In return i will comment on 3-4 of your chosen poems asap: please let me know which ones you want me to comment on.

Thanks alot
Hayley-Ree xxxx

Read both of your Acrostic poems... Great job!! New challenge posted on your poem... ;o)