please read my newest poem

i'll love you long time

its called Joyous Day. constructive criticism is great!

thanks in advance

hey.. i read ur poem.. its reli nice..
sorry bout the constructive criticism, tho.. i was never gud at it.. i just write wat the poem makes me feel

and ur welcome anytime :)

take care
NannO

Let a comment on your poem... of course, it's only my opinion. Great work.

J. Lau

Brilliant Very lovely

All the Best
Sondos

thanks to all of you who commented, i really appreciate it. i've been meaning to comment some of yours but i havent had the time. i will eventually, count on it.

and i think all of you said that you didnt really get the meaning of the poem-- a poem means whatever you want it to mean. i might've written it about something completely different from the way you interpretted it, but that just makes it more interesting lol. now everyone can have a different idea as to what it means. i like to leave things a little open-ended

thanks again