Please Review

Fight of the Colours and Vapour Beneath the Clouds please

Thanks
Sondos

:o Good job. You are a very good writer. The only ones I would like for you to r/v/c on is
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To get a better undertanding.You might want to read As A Child

Thnx!

Left some comments on your poems... Nice writes... Keep writing and keep up the good work!