:o it would mean SOO much :o

  • Jackie Marie
    19 years ago

    Hey... I was wondering if you could read 3 of my poems, vote, and then tell me what you think about them..*
    As a Child
    Forced (1)
    Forced (2)

    I would really love some feedback on them and know what everyone thinks about them. They are all three true.

    Thnx

    P.S I will go and comment and vote on whatever poems you want after this!

  • Jackie Marie
    19 years ago

    Erm wow..does no one believe me when i say that i will r/r/c back??

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    I will read yours!! Read and give feedback on my poems too!
    "Dark Soul"
    "Untitled"
    "Fire Enflame"

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    Shoot. My school computers have a block on all explicit poems. I'll read your other ones.

  • Jackie Marie
    19 years ago

    Hey all my friends are saying that too. I think I am gonna put those in the sad and depressed category so everyone can view them. I will look at your poems in a minute once i move those ones.

  • Jackie Marie
    19 years ago

    Ok i moved them into the sad category thingy. I went and read some of your poetry and I have to tell you..it is really good. You are a really talented writer!

  • Jackie Marie
    19 years ago

    :o i have a new poem please go check it out!