need advice

im new but i have some poems that i would like you guys and girls to help me out and read them... tell me what is my weak point and whats my strong point. thanks in advance for checking out my poems

i will.....going to do it now.... could you also look at some of mine....
Thanks
~*Linz*~

I'll take a look at as many of yours as I can - I just ask that you could please read and give your views on my poem,

I'd Still Choose You

Thanks a lot

Peace. [Sole]

thanks guys i read both of your guys poems and ill comment on it soon