Hey I'm new.

I'm new here, and I know I'm not that good at peotry, but my friend told me I needed an outlet, so I wrote one, so It would be awsome to get some feedback.

I'll keep that in mind, but what I would really like is some feedback and maybe some advice about how to make it better, because thats really the first poem I've ever written.

wow....are sandra maclean and you one and the same....and i'll check out some of your poems...I'm new too so help me out with mine?

[lostlaureate - come find me]

xxx

Hey
I checked out one of your poems, great you've really got talent, I was wondering if you could return the favour and read one of mine, because I'm really new to the whole poem wrting thing - I registered to this site yesterday! Anyway feel free to read some of my poems, any comments are very much appreciated.

Thanks, Jenny