Requesting comments!

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Hey, I'm really looking for comments (honest critiques especially) on my most recent and featured poems. I'll return all comments plus one, in as much detail as you comment on mine.

    In case you're unsure...heres the deal:

    If you read one of mine, I'll read two of yours.
    If you read two of mine, I'll read three of yours, etc.

    Also, I'd appreciate it if you could think of something better to say than "good write 5/5" because I'd rather you walked away and didn't comment than me recieve several of those.

    Thanks.

  • Sole
    19 years ago

    Hey - I commented on two of yours - Please just comment on any titles of mine that stand out to you :) Thanks. Your poetry is awesome :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    I'll read two of yours. Will you please read Another Statistic? and Not mine. ANy other that stands out to you.

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Thanks for the lovely comments you have all left on my poetry. I've returned the favours plus 1.

  • azlan26
    19 years ago

    commented on two of yours - could you take a peek through mine =]

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    azlan26 - thanks for the comments I have returned the favour plus one.

    Anyone else for the deal? It's still on.

  • azlan26
    19 years ago

    thanks :D

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Hey Silver,

    I could use an honest comment for my poem: Walking Straight.

    I'm trying to get a book published. Well my friend's trying to put one together for me. So any reviews help lots.

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Kaylee,

    A well crafted poem indeed, I enjoyed it very much.

    I wish you good luck in your publishing your book.

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    I'm still requesting comments, and returning them plus 1 if anyones interested!

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Can you read Are You Listening and any other one you might like?

  • Rosie
    19 years ago

    I've commented on two of yours - could you comment on mine, please? ^^'