The Lonely Model - deal :)

  • Robert
    19 years ago

    it's about dreaming about something, and when it happens, its the opposite of what it was in a dream.
    it's about my experience on a catwalk.
    id really appreciate it if u guys will rate it, and comment. i want honest rates & comments.
    whoever comments on it, i'll comment on 2 of his/her poems.
    Deal? :)

  • holly
    19 years ago

    okay done could you please comment on. . .Crying from the Eyes and Bleeding From the Heart and any other one thank s ALLY

  • azlan26
    19 years ago

    Done it - could you read dedication and contradiction?
    Thanks =]

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Robert,

    You wanted a honest and decent comment yes?
    Well I've given you one, hope it's ok.

    Could you return the favour on my poem "Clap" and which ever other one you choose to comment on. Thanks.

  • Princess09
    19 years ago

    k ill do urs if you do
    crimson tears
    dreaming of neverland
    please and thank yoiu
    ~~Sweetie