The Lonely Model - deal :)

it's about dreaming about something, and when it happens, its the opposite of what it was in a dream.
it's about my experience on a catwalk.
id really appreciate it if u guys will rate it, and comment. i want honest rates & comments.
whoever comments on it, i'll comment on 2 of his/her poems.
Deal? :)

okay done could you please comment on. . .Crying from the Eyes and Bleeding From the Heart and any other one thank s ALLY

Done it - could you read dedication and contradiction?
Thanks =]

Robert,

You wanted a honest and decent comment yes?
Well I've given you one, hope it's ok.

Could you return the favour on my poem "Clap" and which ever other one you choose to comment on. Thanks.

k ill do urs if you do
crimson tears
dreaming of neverland
please and thank yoiu
~~Sweetie