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  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    I would like honest comments on my most recent and featured poems.
    Please give a more detailed comment than "well done 5/5" because I just wont return the favour on that note.

    Anyway the deal is: however many of mine you read, I'll read the same of yours, plus one.

    Thanks.

  • firexflys
    19 years ago

    i had r/r/c on 2 or your poems could you do the same for my poem "times" and any other you would like. thanks you

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Thanks fireXfly

    I've returned the favour plus one, hope my comments are useful.

    Offer still open if anyone wants to take part.

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Sure, I will. Can you please check out Road Of Shattered Glass. I already know about grammar issues but it's a rough draft froma couple of months ago I haven't gone over yet.

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Anyone?

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Hey Silver, I don't know if you noticed my above post :p

  • Jenny
    19 years ago

    Hi, I've read and commented on two of your poems I would be greatful if you would return the favour. I'm new to the poem writing thing so I need all the comments I can to help me improve.

    Thanks, Jenny

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Thanks Jenny for the comments. I've left some comments on your work, hope it helps!

  • lost_laureate
    19 years ago

    Been browsing through some of your poems and they are really growing on me....Please come and give me some tips on my poetry....

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Yeah I'd like tips too =)

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Can You read my new ones please:

    I Never Knew
    Learning To Kiss Life

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    lost laureate and Kaylee Rose I've commented on your work, great work the both of you.

  • Miss Pipp
    19 years ago

    are we still allowed to say 5/5?
    sorry i couldn't help in asking that.
    sure i'll read and comment :)
    could you please read any of my featured poems?
    thanks in advance
    love to you pip xoXox

  • BrokenToy
    19 years ago

    I read and commented one of your poems. I would have read more too, but I'm in school and have to get to my next class now.
    Could you take a look at one of my poems, if it weren't too much of a trouble? ^^;
    Thanks.

    *BrokenToy