my first poem

  • krzysiek
    19 years ago

    well it is first poem i ever writed, i don't know why i writed it in english (my english is really bad) but i just feel that i had to do it. Anyway... please tell me what you think about it, and if there are any mistakes (for sure there are) please tell me about them.

    Tell me why...

    There is something I need you to say,
    You know that for you i was always there,
    For you I could do everything,
    Tell my why, you didn't understand those things.

    I know that you are not interested in, to be
    my girlfriend, my soul mate... oh no, not to me.
    Now I know everything, and I love you no more.
    Tell me why, you coudn't say me that before.

    You liked when I talked to you that you are my star,
    That's true, coz you were always away from me, away so far.
    You were saying that I'm sweet and cute
    Tell me Why, you didn't told me the truth?

    You never liked me that is the truth...
    You just liked those sweet things I for you do.
    You never told me, that I got no chance,
    You didn't want me to stop this blind dance.
    You hurt me a lot, and I know that you don't care,
    You felt good when I was doing those things, is that fair?

    Finally, I am free from you...
    but I will never forget this, what did you...
    Some part of me, was still in love with you...
    it was my heart, but I had to kill it, to be free from you.

    Goodbye...