Would you read my poems?

  • BrokenToy
    19 years ago

    I would like people to read, rate and comment my poems. Of course I return the favor.

    I need some inspiration and critique. Note that some of my poems are silly things I wrote a while back. Just some quickies I did when I was in a strange mood.

    I have some more too on my old computer that I'm going to post when I get the time. ^_^

    Anyway, thanks!
    *BrokenToy

  • holly
    19 years ago

    sure could you please comment of Confessions of a confused heart xx ALLY xx

  • BrokenToy
    19 years ago

    I'll start reading when I get home from work. ^_^

    Thanks to all of you for reading and commenting my poems.

  • BrokenToy
    19 years ago

    Great poems all of you! ^_^
    I expecially love your poems, Christopher.

  • Jenny
    19 years ago

    Hey,

    I've r/r/c on two of your new poems, they were great! Could you please r/r/c on 'The Race' and 'Death to All - Mwahahaha'.

    Thanks, Jenny

  • felicia
    19 years ago

    could any one read any of my poems To my mom
    Girl in my mirror, and any others by feshia

  • BrokenToy
    19 years ago

    I'm done Jenny. Read your poems. ^_^

    Feshia: If you want me to read your poems, you should return the favor by reading and commenting my featured poems. I'll read as many of yours as you read of mine... ^_^

    *BrokenToy

  • azlan26
    19 years ago

    HeyI read Threatening, dangerous, terrifying

    Could you please read 'vivisection'