Please help

Umm I have two new poems called 'I scream disease' and 'Screaming disease' I was just wanting some feedback on them I'd really appreciate constructive crits and I promise to return the favour by reading at the least one of your poems. I give good honest opinions and constructive crits. Would appreciate it.

-Lenny

Hey,

I read and commented on your two poems, I really liked them, I hope I gave constructive crits for you, if you could read 'The Race' I'd be very happy.

Thanks, Jenny

Any of my featured ones but if you like it please continue to read them.

Sure + thanks I appreciate the crits.